Al Franken is scathingly brilliant!

December 14, 2011

You’re a nonprofit fundraiser, right?  That’s why you’re here, am I correct?

Take a look at the latest email to land in my inbox from Al Franken (click to read):

Takeaways?

  • A fun, breezy subject header.  One that makes you curious to open.
  • It’s personalized
  • A you-centered story, one that everyone can relate to
  • A gradually escalating call to action
  • And check out the P.S.

{ 5 comments… read them below or add one }

Janelle December 15, 2011 at 11:48 am

That’s deeply awesome.

Aaron December 16, 2011 at 1:02 pm

That is one of the most creative and endearing emails I have ever seen. Thank you for posting!

Gayle L. Gifford, ACFRE December 20, 2011 at 2:26 pm

Ah, an appeal with personality. Love it.
Gayle

P.S. He’s certainly gotten every fundraiser to pass it on, hasn’t he.

Kirsten Bullock, Fundraising Coach January 2, 2012 at 8:50 am

Fun and conversational. Thanks for sharing this. It’s interesting though that the email has two different calls to action. Most of what I’ve been seeing lately strongly encourages having just one call to action. What has your experience in this area been?

Pamela Grow January 2, 2012 at 8:52 am

I’d say “it depends.” However, speaking personally, when I’m writing email copy for clients I’ll typically go with just one call to action.

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